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Red-team the win-the-listing pitch

Rung 8 of 10 · Red-team audit

1 · Learn the move · Red-team audit

Your pitch to win a landlord's listing lives or dies on credibility, and the fastest way to lose it is a claim the owner can't verify. The 'we lease 40% faster' stat with no source, the flat '$32/SF' rent promise, the '2M SF leased' track record you can't document. AI drafts these confidently, and a landlord who catches one fabrication discounts the whole pitch. Run a red-team audit before it goes out: quote each claim and strike or fix it. An unsupported stat is struck. Source it or cut it. A value or rent number becomes a range with cited comps, never a guarantee. A track-record figure gets flagged 'source it or soften.' You're not defanging the pitch; you're rebuilding it on what's actually true. A listing won on a number you can't defend is a listing you lose when the market doesn't deliver it.

Here's my pitch to win this landlord's listing. Make it more persuasive.
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2 · Your turn. You write the prompt

You're a leasing broker pitching to win a landlord's listing. Your draft says: 'we lease space 40% faster than the market' (no source cited), 'your building will command $32/SF' (a flat promise), and 'we've leased over 2M SF downtown' (a track-record stat). Red-team the pitch before it reaches the owner.

Remember: the AI sees only your prompt, not this page. If the situation isn't in your prompt, it doesn't exist.

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